So i think my first submission survived . . . Barely. I got a lot of valuable feed back specifily aimed at the problems i was haveing, which i am very happy about. While it was not blammed i still feel like it was real low quality, which it was. but hopefully by submitting it i can learn what i need to make somthing good much sooner then i would have otherwise. All in all it was an okay experiance. ^-^